Monday, November 22, 2010
"I will be with you on your wedding night" (chapter 23)
Like I promised Victor, I was with him on his wedding night, but not in the way he expected. I saw him arm himself expecting me to go after him, but he was gravely mistaken. When he sent his bride back to the room that they were staying in, I made my move. He went away, probably to search for me, but I followed Elizabeth back to the room. As soon as she was alone, I murdered her, but not before allowing a scream. I waited at the window for victor to rush in, to allow him one moment of agony before I fled him. He fired at me, but I escaped in triumph.
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So Carl: Great job! You made me really not like the creature and see his maliciousness. Maybe you should elaborate more on what happened afterwards though. Maybe express more satisfaction at Elizabeth and Victor's fathers death. Great job though!
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